a fan made story based on mass effect

A book based on Bioware hard hitting game, Mass Effect.

*Still Working on Title* <WARNING!> This is the illegal version of “The Unregistered Effect” Stolen, Uncredited Artwork, Therefore My name shall remain Anonymous (Cause you can’t sue what you don’t know) There will be a Non-illegal version (No Stolen, Uncredited Artwork)
Now we’ve got that out of the way, Questions and Answers
Question 1: Will Commander Shepard be in this?
Answer: Maybe, 87% chance “No” other percent Yeah maybe, Like by 7% “Yes”
Question 2: Will the other characters From the mass effect series will appear in this?
Answer: Same thing with Question one.
Question 3: Do You have to pay for this book?
Answer: 0.00$ +No Tax. (This book is made for fun, not profit)
But! Just a tip, there will be mass effect’s species/races.
Now on to page one. (P.S this take place where the reapers were defeated)

The Unregistered Effect
and when i look at my story, i realize that there are some holes in the story, let me fix that
Basically, the there is a sector called the Unregistered sector, its called that because the sector is undetectable, therefore it can be only found by using special tech or special firmware, the Unregistered would rather be unknown.

http://wikisend.com/download/110454/The%20Unregistered%20Effect.rar
NOTE! mario took a look at my book and he pointed out alot holes and mistakes and right as your reading this, im revising the whole thing
P.S Thanks mario!

Thong, You really should be a writer, like me. It's hard to make a living off of just writing, but it can be like a second job that you work on at your own pace and you work for yourself, meaning you don't have a boss. I'm happy you take an interest it this stuff.

jastolze wrote:Thong, You really should be a writer, like me. It's hard to make a living off of just writing, but it can be like a second job that you work on at your own pace and you work for yourself, meaning you don't have a boss. I'm happy you take an interest it this stuff.

I can't wait to see more stuff from Thong